Avatar: the game

First topic message reminder :

David walked down the path to Ba Sing Se. werily david whiped his head "why didn't I get a map of this place." David said befor sitting down on one side of the path then lit a fire befor making camp

[i hate spell check it pees me off!]

Jess looked over at the the others and called back"no thank you!" and she sat down infront of her fire.

"Hmm" David thought for a minute, "doesn't she seem a bit nervics to you," he said to Laura.

"I honestly don't blame her" Laura said as she sat on the ground crossed legged infront of David, with her back to Jess.

"well bender have been diserpering, not the strong ones mind you," David said, "thats why I got myself a foces staff, I can make you one if you want." he then offered

Laura frowned... "What the heck is a forces staff???"

"It maximises your ability," David explained, "you saw how bad I was, whach this." David put one end of the stick on the ground quickly a ice bubble formed around them the pick them up off the ground. "I can keep this up for more the a day, but I get bord." {the ice is see though

"....right....." Laura said... "I can do that without a stupid stick... and with earth..."

David smiled "OK miss prove it" then he made the ice diserpear leavening them in the air. they went that high up. but it was heap to prove his point.

"Your on!" said Laura, jumping to her feet. "Bending battle?"

{you falling, not siting on the ground }

{{I dont get it, he only had the ice around him self... ok its around laura too watev)


Laura yelled as she fell through the air, back towards the ground. She landed on her feet surprisingly. A wall of dust surrounded her. When the dust cleared there where fissures in the ground. She gritted her teeth and stood up. She folded her arms and rose them into the air. A massive earth pillar rose under neath her.

David looked up at her "it's ment to be hoverning and a ball around you." David glanced at the fire bender

Laura had no idea what this kid was talking about. She stood up on her earth pillar and said "I think your a bit crazy in the head..."

(LOL im confused...)

David sighed "I made a ice ball around us not a piller" David taped the piller with his stick then jumping back when it colapsed "wow, are you ok?" he asked waving at the dust

Laura was still confused as she landed on the ground. Cracks appeared in the ground. "How d'you do that with that stick... that aint suposed to happen"

(btw dyou think that out characters should be double benders? and their second ability is our horoscope??? david-leo-fire jess-tauras-earth laura-pisces-water)

[no way... for one i'd refuse to have earth as anoher bending... and two are other reasons..]


Jess watched them and shook her head. They were completely nuts!

(you can have another element.)

Laura caught the eye of the fire girl and stopped

David fround "you know I swear I saw a fire spark, but I'm a water bender, unless..."David looked up at the fire bender. "Is it just me or Is she fovering on a fire disk?"

(no power play)

"dont change the subject... did you just say that you saw a fire spark?"

{power play?}

David looked back."yea makes no scence to me. but... my Dad is a water priest and hates fire people, he alway had a reference to fire when he talk about her, not nice things."

"her?"

(you said what jess's character was doing, thats power play, you can only control your character not other peoples)

"Sory," David looked around it was dark, realy dark "I think I'll turn in for to night." David went to a rold up mat spreaded it out near the fire and lyded down faceing away from the fire.